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Title: Critique on Happy Song
Post by: eternal_renegade on Fri 28/07/2006 19:12:58
this song is for the game I am making about a baby turtle. This song is for the main area of the game, the cliffside. I am looking for some criticism. (sorry if I don't change this song, but what I do is I use the criticism in later songs)

http://media.putfile.com/Cliffside
Title: Re: Critique on Happy Song
Post by: n3tgraph on Fri 28/07/2006 20:25:42
Hey you really set the atmoshpere right.

The only thing that really bugs me are the drums.
The melody seems to be happy and peacefull as the drums are a bit brutal.

If you want the kick snare thing to stay i'd change the sounds a bit more natural... uhm like
maybe changing the snare for a woodblock and the kick for another natural 'boom'

I hope you understand what I'm saying.
The drum-kit isn't setting the atmosphere right I think
Title: Re: Critique on Happy Song
Post by: eternal_renegade on Fri 28/07/2006 21:10:42
i see what you mean but it's hard for me to decribe what exactly the scene looks like,  but well your in a cliff (i mean just basically one huge tower in the sky) but yeah, Ill try both ways however. Thanks
Title: Re: Critique on Happy Song
Post by: Mad-Hatter on Tue 01/08/2006 04:48:55

Yeah, I remember this song...

Is it loopable? And what other songs will be used in the game?
Title: Re: Critique on Happy Song
Post by: eternal_renegade on Tue 01/08/2006 14:10:36
Yeah it's loopable, considering you will be working on the project I might as well show you when we talk again. But the flute right there is the main theme of the game. So just about every theme played will be based off of that theme.