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Title: Critique on my choon contest entry.
Post by: Chicky on Thu 01/02/2007 00:43:18

http://media.putfile.com/boyhatbirdsong

only serious critique please, this is the 17th track for my new album set to hit the stores early summer.

Title: Re: Critique on my choon contest entry.
Post by: Evil on Thu 01/02/2007 04:41:52

I got a fever. And the only prescription is more yellow bird!

The "G" string sounds a bit sharp too.

Title: Re: Critique on my choon contest entry.
Post by: twin-moon on Fri 02/02/2007 01:48:44

i listen to Daniel Johnston for fun and this sounds exactly like it.
Like the scream on 0:25!

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