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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: kimberley71 on Thu 12/08/2004 12:45:30

Title: Critique please
Post by: kimberley71 on Thu 12/08/2004 12:45:30
Okay, I drew really tiny pics and this is how they turned out, about as small as I can get them, not nearly as much detail as I would like...any ideas for more detail or improvement?

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Gretelfaceleft.pcx)

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Gretelsprite.pcx)
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: kimberley71 on Thu 12/08/2004 12:47:45
Okay why aren't my pics showing? I uploaded them... ???
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: mousemat on Thu 12/08/2004 12:54:47
that happens ..but they will come back on soon :=
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: kimberley71 on Thu 12/08/2004 13:04:07
Quote from: mousemat on Thu 12/08/2004 12:54:47
that happens ..but they will come back on soon :=

thanks mm :), was worried there for a sec
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: Ozwalled on Thu 12/08/2004 13:36:55
Hm. My browser won't let me see them... for some reason they open directly in Paint Shop Pro for me (I did a "quote" then copied and pasted the links...). Weird.

But it seems to me that the uploading site thing doesn't support .pcx files. Try .gif or .png in the future instead.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Gretelfaceleft_walk.png) (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Gretelsprite_front.png)

They look real nice, though.

As far as adding detail does, to ME, the major spot that lacks discernable detail is her hair. Adding some dark(er) outlines might help define its shape and texture a bit better.

And the shading on her pants is odd to me... unless they're supposed to be a sort of blue latex/ pvc/ vinyl/ pleather kind of thing, in which case they totally rock 'nads.

For detail in her top (her bust area especially), you could add some sort of highlight again, to help define their shape a little better, I guess.
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: Andail on Thu 12/08/2004 15:00:48
Most browsers don't display .pcx images. Probably none.
So Mousemat; no, they will not come back on soon.

Do as Ozwalled suggested and save them in another format.
Title: Re: Critique please
Post by: R4L on Sat 14/08/2004 04:12:10
Wow! Nice sprites. They show lots of personality.