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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: [Cameron] on Wed 20/10/2004 08:24:32

Title: Darkness
Post by: [Cameron] on Wed 20/10/2004 08:24:32
I have a poem. This time it is free of cliches (hopefully). The art you see is done by Farlander. I handed this in to my English Techer to put on the wall. The art isn't graded, only the poem and i told her the artwork wasn't mine anyway. I really needed so it looked presentable. Anyway, the poem. C+C a must.
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Darkness4.doc
Title: Re: Darkness
Post by: Nacho on Wed 20/10/2004 17:32:50
Hey, thanks for the quoting! It was not really necessary, it was a ten-minute work...

I can't really crit the poem... Sounds good for me, but I am crappy at English. Any improvements I would recommend should definitelly finish in a "F" by your teacher.  ;D