C&C on BG

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http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/IntroBGCity.png (453k)

I need C&C on my BG
i'm not going to chage it cuz I'm too lazy
but ill use your critics to improve others BGs that i'm making

Edit: I have changed the geosite link to 2dadventure
thanks maybe ill try to add some small details and change the clouds

o/

[DoorKnobHandle]

I just put your picture in [ IMG ] - tags so everyone can see it right away, you should consider doing this in your original post the next time, too...

Your background looks good so far, I would maybe add more details to the empty parts (like the grass terrain or the big yellow wall) and change the clouds since their blurriness doesn't really fit to the outlined style of the rest of the image.

Good work though.

[Babar]

nice, but one's gonna wonder why such important looking buildings are so far from the road.

Edit: Yikes, I think it was better linked!

[Ubel]

That wide picture should not be put in [IMG] -tags, [ ... ].

I like the simple style of this picture. Though you could add more details to it but I think it's good as it is anyway.

[Paper Carnival]

I like your style! It's simple, yet great. And you add details when you should. I love the house on the right (even though maybe the wall could need *some* detail because it looks kinda plain next to that kickbutt gate .

The only thing I noticed that is kinda "off" is that the further shadows are a lot bigger than the ones on the front. Yes, they are closer to the lightsource, but consider that there's a lot of distance, which makes my brain process the back shadows as much bigger. You could make them a bit smaller and the front ones a bit larger.

Also, shouldn't the road have those white line thingies?

And btw, [...], the image screws up the thread template. I'd rather you didn't direct link to it

Edit: Babar is right, maybe if you showed another road linking to those buildings or something it would be better.

[DoorKnobHandle]

Allright, allright, thanks for telling me like three-times in a row.

I would resize it using the [ IMG width=x height=y ] function, but it doesn't seem to exist anymore?!

EDIT: It has actually exceeded it's transfer space. I love geocities...

[Oliver]

Add more detail to the grass and you haven't shaded the sidewalk and street at all (or just a little)