Time for some fanart!

[Rincewind]

Well, well, one would think that due to the downtime of the forums, I would have had time to work on my game, right? Well, wrong! I would have, had it not been for the fact that the computer that I have everything on decided to be a jerk and crash, so it'll take a while before I can get back on that track.

So, just recently, I started reading some of my old X-men comics again, and realized it would be pretty fun to do some fanart for a change. (And to prevent my drawing skills from deteriorating...)
So, here it is.



I did both Wolverine and Cyclops at first, but then settled for Storm. Hehe.
My main concern is how I should do to get her chest/breasts to look good - I've tried several times without getting it to look good.
But any critisism or comment is as always welcome!

Cheers!

[Chicky]

Excellent, i love it.

[Rincewind]

Glad to hear that you like it, chicken!
But folks, there's got to be something that could use some improvement, right?

[Keebo]

Maybe add effects to the eyes?

[Squinky]

I too think it looks pretty good. As far as my opinion though, I look at it and think that maybe the hair-line is to high, but thats just me prolly. Also, the way the hair falls on her shoulders seems unatural too me....I think it should rest differently...

As far as the breasts, like always when you have problems, you should find plenty of reference pictures....Heh...

P.s. You need to make Snake work more on LE man, I'm dying over here....

[Rincewind]

Keebo:
Heh, well, I would do that, but I'm afraid effects will just make it look cheaper... Plus, Storm should have clear, white eyes. 

Squinky:
You might be right about the hair-line, I based it on a picture I found in a X-men comic book, and there her hair looked kind of funny... I'll try and see if I can get it to look better, though...

Haha, yeah, I'll see what I can find... Shouldn't be too hard...

I should have gotten back to him, man, but my computer has been down or a while, so I'm gonna wait until it's ok again,. until I start "bugging" him again... Hehe...

[YOke]

If you look at the "point" of ther hair on her forehead you can see it's not in line with her nose as i should be, it's slightly to her right.
Storm har more of a chin too. I think the eyes, nose and lips should be a bit further up on the face. This aside, the style is great and you can't go wrong with X-Men!

[Rincewind]

YOke:
Good points - I don't know if I covered them all in my edit, but I think I'm heading in the right direction...
And nope, you can never ever go wrong with X-Men! Now that's a fact.



I think my next point will be fixing the hair... I just realized that it looks kind of wierd at the hair-ends...
Plus that I'm gonna do some scouting for some good body references... Ahem...

[Developer]

I hope this looks good. 

[Rincewind]

Well, Developer, I wouldn't know, since it doesn't show... Could you perhaps upload it again? I'd love to see what it was...

[Keebo]

Sorry I didnt save it I just deleted it after I uploaded it. It worked for a hour but then stoped. 

[Rincewind]

Just some minor edits - Fixed the hair, etc.

[Developer]

I dont even know if it looks better but here ya go: