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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Dmitri on Wed 18/06/2003 13:54:52

Title: Dmitri's art junk - page 5
Post by: Dmitri on Wed 18/06/2003 13:54:52
lo.

this is more of an announcement than anything... but it has to do with my arting around so I guess putting it here's what I'm gonna do :p

I've been drawing this for a while, I've given it the title "The Unlucky Rabbit's Foot." It's a comic about a rabbit (still to be named) who... isn't exactly the luckiest little bunny on the planet. It's not meant to be a funny comic, in case that's what you're expecting.

Anyway, the following is a link to the disclaimer page, it says everything I want to say here so there's no point in continuing

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/Unluckfoot.html

and yes I'm well aware of the typo but I couldn't be arsed fixing it.
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot
Post by: gonzalezj on Wed 18/06/2003 16:34:26
I can't wait to see more of these. I hope you clean up the one that you have so that it isn't so dark at the bottom. Is that a scanning problem?

Cheers,
gonzalezj  :)
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot
Post by: Dmitri on Thu 19/06/2003 01:51:02
nah... that was me with the dreaded gradient tool trying to be artsy  ;D

I can't actually 'fix' it anymore since all the layers are flattened and all... the same way I couldn't be arsed with that typo. if it's any consolation I won't do it again...
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot
Post by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Thu 19/06/2003 02:56:58
Poor Bunny  :'(
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot
Post by: Neole on Thu 19/06/2003 18:07:37
Nice, very effective!
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 2
Post by: Dmitri on Fri 20/06/2003 04:32:53
thanks ^_^

Sasha: didn't you read my disclaimer... people who like bunnies shouldn't read it. ;)

Page 2's up, just go to the disclaimer page in my first post :)
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 2
Post by: Neole on Fri 20/06/2003 10:56:32
I think you should have the grey shade as in the first page as that made it look much more professional.
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 2
Post by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Sat 21/06/2003 00:39:31
Nah, I don't like bunnies when they run around the country side eating away grass that should be eaten by native animals. Actually, I really like the idea. I just pitied the character because he was unlucky and not because he was a bunny.
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 2
Post by: Dmitri on Sat 21/06/2003 14:02:32
Neole: I did try and put a gradient on this one, but I'd already used the idea and it was starting to look as if I was some cheesy two bit artist (which I am, I just don't want people to assume that from what I draw)

After I read your post though I gave it another shot and I was actually really pleased with my result

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/page22.gif (cut & paste the link)

Sorry about the terrible inking on the second panel, but that's how it looks in rl too :/

Sasha: I agree
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: Dmitri on Thu 03/07/2003 07:19:45
ha... bet you all thought I was never going to do the next page... didn't you?

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/page3.gif

copy/paste the link to the url thingy ma bob
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 03/07/2003 07:53:44
is this going to be an evil revenge?

btw in that last, the bunny looks somewhat like a kangaroo
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Thu 03/07/2003 08:08:13
Well, bunnies are very similar to kangaroos in structure because they both hop. Very nice Dmitri, I'm just wondering if that bunny is ever going to turn evil, since he does see a lot of death maybe he will go to get revenge on humankind...
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: Gilbert on Thu 03/07/2003 08:09:14
That reminds me of RON2...
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: Dmitri on Thu 03/07/2003 09:29:01
I'd love to answer but I don't wanna give stuff away... sorry  :'(

n3t, hey, he does too... ahh well, them's the breaks...
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 3
Post by: Dmitri on Wed 09/07/2003 16:43:38
Page 4 ^_^

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/Page4.gif

cut & paste link to see le comic
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 4
Post by: Neole on Wed 09/07/2003 23:39:37
Oooh, I cant stand the suspense!
Title: Re:Unlucky Rabbit's foot-page 4
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 10/07/2003 08:14:45
I almost cried....
Title: Re:The topic that won't die-page 5
Post by: Dmitri on Tue 15/07/2003 11:36:04
I fiddled around with colours this time, but converted to grayscale because it's meant to be nighttime

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/Page5.gif

unless the idiot driving the car left his headlights on during the day mind you...

warning, this has swearing, parental discretion required :p
Title: Re:The topic that won't die-page 5
Post by: n3tgraph on Tue 15/07/2003 12:05:20
is he becoming an asylum?
Title: Re:Dmitri's art junk - page 5
Post by: Dmitri on Tue 22/07/2003 12:42:35
Heya everyone, I figured that I might as well just put any art that I'm truly proud of in here, along with the bunny comic (page six is on the way... trust me...) there's no reason for me to start new threads every time I draw a doodle that I like.

I'll still keep what page I'm up to in the topic though...

anyway, this is truly the first piece of work where, when I looked at it, I shook my head and got misty eyed, in disbelief that THAT WAS MY WORK! That was my pen which had doodled that in my maths book... this work was mine.

Suffice to say I love it.

http://www.geocities.com/dmitri4122/Dmitri1.gif

copy&Paste link to see...