Rolf und Joachim

[ScottDoom]

Here are our characters for a game currently titled R&J: A WWII Adventure. Rolf is on the right, and Joachim is on the left.


(These characters were drawn by our artist, Wesley.)

Joachim was previously commented on, but if you feel you have anything to add please do so.

[Darth Mandarb]

These are excellent!

So full of character!

The only thing I would comment on is Rolf's eyes and hair.

Are these still 'In Progress'?

I would add pupils to Rolf's eyes and some shading/detail to his hair.

I can't wait to see what you do with these!

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[ScottDoom]

Rolf's hair and eyes are meant to be that way... It's sort of the style. When pupils are added, the eyes look funny. I think the hair could use some detail and/or shading.

[n3tgraph]

I think avoiding black outlines would improve the pictures,

they need a litte touching up, but they look quite funny

note that they are pretty large, must be a very high res game  :o

[big brother]

FWIW
It almost seems like their faces are a different style than the rest of their bodies. For instance, the wrinkles on the pants almost have a sketchy quality to them (thick black shading), while the faces only have a very exact black outline.

[Privateer Puddin']

I thought the change in lines between clothes and faces looked rather good.

[Kweepa]

Hey...
They look a lot like like Dougie and Ivor from Troubled Souls and more recently Dicks...

[edit] Very nice though. Only thing is Dougie's, I mean Rolf's, belt seems too high.

[Guest12]

Heh, Danny and Ar-nahld are back again!

[Paper Carnival]

The only thing I would comment on is Rolf's eyes and hair.

Are these still 'In Progress'?

I would add pupils to Rolf's eyes and some shading/detail to his hair.

I like the eyes. They make him look more evil and with the "I wanna take over the world" style

[YOke]

Something about these characters (maybe it's Rolf's blank eyes ) reminds me of a (belgian?) comic called "Cubitus"... Am I on to something, or just stumbling around in the dark?