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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Estaog on Sun 04/07/2004 14:06:45

Title: Done (Please Close)
Post by: Estaog on Sun 04/07/2004 14:06:45
What do you think of my agent? Notice how he has no hand, i didnt have any idea on hor to draw it.I am quite proud of the armour.Hands kindly axcepted.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Agent.gif)
Title: Re: Done (Please Close)
Post by: MrColossal on Mon 05/07/2004 00:38:40
are you asking me to delete this topic?

otherwise i really like him, his square head is nice and thick body is really good looking.

also i suggest maybe you could push his legs back a touch so that he looks like he's standing better

or bring his body forward a bit

know what i mean?
Title: Re: Done (Please Close)
Post by: Chicky on Mon 05/07/2004 00:42:34
Is that your first try at your OWN sprite Tanker?

I think it has a nice style, reminds me of rodekill. I would suggest at making the "armour" more armour looking, because if you had not said i would have thought he was just wearing a t-shirt. Maybe you could make it look like it raises ablve his body more, at the moment it looks very tight. Also try fixing the double pixels that are dotted around.

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-nath
Title: Re: Done (Please Close)
Post by: Renal Shutdown on Mon 05/07/2004 00:50:47
Good first attempt, but like Eric, I'd suggest working on the body shape a bit.
The following is a rather poorly drawn try at hands and armor.
(http://www.lumpcity.co.uk/ags/stuff/crit01.gif)
I like the beefy, action man on steriods feel to him, tho.
Title: Re: Done (Please Close)
Post by: switcharoo on Mon 05/07/2004 10:35:26
The arm with the hand missing is a lot bigger (more muscular) than his left arm. Also it looks a little like his head is stiched on beacuse there is a "seam" around his neck.

And ditto for all the suggestions so far. Cool looking charater, just needs some work (and a nose maybe :P)
Title: Re: Done (Please Close)
Post by: Estaog on Mon 05/07/2004 11:04:53
Come here:
http://www.agsforums.com/yabb/index.php?topic=15123.0
Close this one please.