More music asks for crits (no adventure game stuff)

[Oliwerko]

Hi again folks,

Today I finished the first album that consists of my creations.
I know there are a lot of experienced musicians out there so I wanted to get some feedback from you guys.

Anyway, here is the link.

Please, tell me how you like/dislike them and what could I do to generally improve this stuff.

Thanks! 

[Nikolas]

Slow download... SLOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooow! And 36 MB zipped folder!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhh!

(Will edit or repost, but did want to notify everyone who would like to download the folder).

[Alarconte]

Me goes the file to 60kb/s .... not very slow.. xD



Well, I listened to all the album

Pros:: Some songs reminds me the computer games good times, like Command & Conquer (Ponghorn, Blood Machine) Or Tyrian (Come to speak to me) This is ever a good point; If reminds good music, could mean is ear-sympathic music.

Contras: Some songs are boring to dead, not by his repetitive, but a 10 minutes song (as an example, i'm not talking 'bout ponghorn exactly) with too many variated rythms, is bad done; Isn't normal that people like the 1/4 part of the song, and the 3/4 part, and the 2/4 y 4/4 hated it.

A song, Else electronical, has to introduce from the first part of the sond the theme, the musical style, and the listener hears the song 'cause he would hear all the changes and conclusion of the style of this song.

But If the song changes a lot of times with tottaly inconected styles...
(Partially Duch os on west and everyday fun, The brutal changes of instruments is hurting)

Bloody Machine continual is painfull to hear, simply..

But Bloody machine and Come speak to me, I love it!

[Oliwerko]

60kb by me too, I did not know where to put it, so the first choice was and FTP server, you know...


Thanks for crits, Alarconte!


About the instrument changes, in Everyday fun it was intentional so you get a feeling of alternating the theme. I tried to make a song without a regular repetition. In Durch Ost und West I considered it weird, but I get a weird feeling only like for 2 seconds when the change is done, instead of that, the instrument fits nicely, I think. I have no clue how to solve this one.

My biggest struggle is probably that I am trying not to make it boring and repetitive and that results in sudden inconnective changes.

Anyway, 2 very good songs out of 10 made is a good score for a beginner, I think 

Thanks again for your review.