Am I going in the right direction? NEW IMAGE!

Nacho · Tue 19/10/2004 18:35:20

Yeah... As for the feet, I lied to myself saying nobody would going to notice it, because the vision of them should be blocked by the body, but, mmmmm... I should do something with it, yeah.

About the tears, I'll probably make something, but I don't think they're a big bug. Glasses have a very special behave in cartoons, they sometimes can be moved, acting like eyebrows, and yeah, IMO a tear can sprout of them over the glasses, not below.

But, of course, thanks for the help, and wait for the updates!

Evil · Tue 19/10/2004 20:37:54

That a pretty big hampster. Make have him cupping his hands with a little, bitty hampster lying in them? I think that would give it a sadder effect. The picture itself is great.

Nacho · Fri 22/10/2004 18:59:08

IMPROVEMENTS! Which one do you preffer? I preffer the Bgrounded one, is the level of detail correct?

Thanks!

Pet Terry · Sat 23/10/2004 07:47:42

Ooh, lovely! It reminds me of the days before AGS when I tried to create a DOTT-style adventure game... I have to play DOTT again someday soon.

As for those two pictures, I prefer the one with background. I love the floor/carpet, it looks really "DOTTy".

Keep it up, it looks awesome.

Damien · Sat 23/10/2004 10:24:01

The only comment I have is to change the wide open eyes with x-es, since the hamster is supposed to be dead. I mean like: x_x

Keep it up.

Nacho · Sat 23/10/2004 10:54:34

Can I crit myself? I think the body of Weird looks tiny, and, while I agree with you and preffer the backgrounded image, I think it must be altered a little to make it seem more little in comparision with Weird's body. One thing is to make it cartoony and the other to alter it completely... $:-\$ I'll made the background again. Advise: Make your art, and don't look to it in some time, 1/2 or so... You'll see it different and the errors more clearly.

n3tgraph · Sat 23/10/2004 14:05:10

If I remember correctly, this guy has a huge torso and small feet....

I tried print screening the bitch, but it didn't work :S
I think this artwork rox

intermalte · Sat 23/10/2004 22:24:49

The hamster could look more dead. Maybe crosses in its eyes?

Scummbuddy · Sun 24/10/2004 00:06:06

and thats exactly what damien said....

I would love to see more of your shots that you make concerning this style and liscense(dott).

intermalte · Sun 24/10/2004 12:27:18

Oh - I just read side one of this thread - and wondered why I couldn't see my post... :