What do you think of this four handed, red bearded, fat guy?
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch.PNG)
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This is just a sketch, but still is it good?
okey dokey. you see you CAN draw. did a quick paintover though. evened out his arms and added some face.Ã, got rid of some double pixels just because they annoy me
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fatman.gif)
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(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fatman.gif)
Good paint over, but i didnt want to show his face, mayebe il just do it like this:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch1.PNG)
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I want the arms to stay like that, no offense.
Fat people still have 2 arms, trust me
you cant have a straight hair line, make it less box like
bigger hands maybe
Just a quick question tho, did you draw it or is it a paint over?
why are all of his arms on one side? it made more sense to me to have two on each. add some eyebrows. a guy with that much hair would have eyebrows.
and DOUBLE PIXELS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Added some ayebrowns and removed one of the arms/double pixels:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch3.PNG)
I dont know how to fix the hair thou.
(http://img29.photobucket.com/albums/v86/Haddas/Other/Scetch4.png)
edited the hands a little and fixed tha hair a bit
My take on your 'sketch'
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch3.gif)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Scetch3.gif)
- Added more life to the beard
- Showed part of moustache
- Removed belly button :P
- Fixed fro/beard shading
- added ears
- somewhat fixed hands
Edit:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/untitled465546.PNG)
Cool axe huh?
Way to go Tanker!
He looks like Hagrid
(http://www.fbc-bettendorf.com/evil/crap/fat_arm.png)
(http://www.fbc-bettendorf.com/evil/crap/fat_arm.png)
I added a wing for good measure.
I think the older version looked better, no offense. I mean you shortened the hair, removed the detail, removed the axe. Its just not him anymore.And whats with the wing?
Evils is better, not sure about the wing though
Here is a very rough scatch of the side view.I dont know whats worng with it but it just looks wrong.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Side.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tanker.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tanker.PNG)
Tanker, the Axe is in the wrong position compared to the frontview, if you compare them
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/untitled465546.PNG)(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Side.PNG)
also, the layer of fat you see on the side view seemsto bend in the wron direction, otherwise it's nice
The axe prespective is wrong also and the knees are to far out
Hey LostTraveler, i think il use that one in my game, just remove the bra, the axe and the cap.Looks really nice.
Il edit the view tomorrow, i have exams tomorrow so il go study now.Bye!
Ah what the hell here it is guys:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Side2.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tanker2.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tanker2.PNG)
use evils method of shading at least. also his head is much better.
Lost...um...right...
I can see you chracter is improving, zooty.
You shouldn't critisize and brush away other peoples paintovers like that. Just tell them it wasn't exactly what you meant and you'll try to illustrate it further to help them understand...
Quote from: Tanker on Thu 24/06/2004 21:34:12
Ah what the hell here it is guys:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Side2.PNG)
I think his hand is way to skiny for a fat guy...
QuoteI can see you chracter is improving, zooty.
um, Zor, its not my character. i have just posted here alot becuase i want to help tanker. i dind't brush away other peoples paintovers i just like evils the best.
Umm zooty i think he was being sarcastik.
Edit:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Side12.PNG)
Made the arm bigger. Any more critics?
(never mind the line)
his kneecaps stick out. a bit. otherwise. looking good. (i think he was confused not sarcastic)
Here's my suggestion:
(http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3355/fat.gif)
(http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3355/fat.gif)
- fixed arm... was back about an arms width too far
- fixed leg/knee
- changed hand... current position is unnatural
- changed body to match new arm position
- changed gut
- changed shading a bit
Anyways here is the back view and the naked view (well almost):
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/back.PNG)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/naked.PNG)
One thing that bugging me... I know hes an overweight, red haired, axe weilding, sometimes semi-naked Hagrid look-a-like but why does he have a third arm?Ã, ???
Why wouldn't he?
just noticed when looking at it from the back. that axe looks like its been nailed on. i did a quick p/o and came up with this. its VERY quick please modify it. just to show the idea. you would also need to modify the front ad sde views accrodingly thoughÃ, ;)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/axestrap.gif)
He has a third arm because all the characters in my game are wierd ( i mean come on you play as a man in a cow suite).And the reason i made it look like its hammered in his back is that i wanted it to look like its hammered in his back.Made sure hed never loose it ::)
he is missing his third arm on the back view.....
Thats because it is covered by the axe.
Uh, his extra arm is on his left side to it wouldn't be covered by the axe...
No it's not.
The third arm is on the other side.
Edit: Argh. dg beat me to it.
Nevermind.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/untitled166346.PNG)
Quote from: Tanker on Fri 25/06/2004 13:52:00
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/untitled166346.PNG)
He has man-breasts on his back :o ;D
Seriously though, his hands are still too small, unless you really want them like that... And the hair on the back view needs a little more texture/shading IMO.
i got rid of them in my p/o but nobody took any notice ;)
Quote from: Zootyfruit on Fri 25/06/2004 15:17:14
i got rid of them in my p/o but nobody took any noticeÃ, ;)
Don't feel bad Zooty, I noticed :D
I also think having a strap to hold red head's axe was a good idea, but there ya go... as Tanker said, these characters are weird ::)
I put them back because fat people have them, they are a layer of fat and the reason the hand is small is because it is devaured into the fat.
Fat people have man-boobs on their backs?
The second arm seems much fatter than the normal one. Maybe you should beef up the normal arm to match?
They are not boobs. Il see to that arm later, you guys should chek the sprite jam, im competing!