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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Martyn on Wed 14/10/2015 22:49:21

Title: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: Martyn on Wed 14/10/2015 22:49:21
It's the approach of the airplane working, the turn?

I want it simple and less grafik. now it's the airplane five gif images.

https://vimeo.com/142434855 (https://vimeo.com/142434855)

Code: ags

Sorry, its little cranky in the beginnings, it makes a smooth approach but my computer is thinking too much. :grin:
Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: Blondbraid on Wed 14/10/2015 22:58:50
Looks pretty neat and lovely graphics, though I'm no aviation expert and cannot tell whether the plane moves correctly. I see nothing wrong with it though.
Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: selmiak on Wed 14/10/2015 23:15:05
looks good and the path is okay, the animation could need 2-3 frames inbetween if you want to go the extramile, otherwise it is okay already.
Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: Martyn on Fri 16/10/2015 19:17:05

Thanks! :smiley:

It may be as it is now, has just made a few small changes in time.
Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: Kumpel on Sat 17/10/2015 11:03:53
All in all I like it. It looks nicely designed and the turn frames are fitting.

Here are some ideas:

Maybe you could animate the propeller too. Would help me "believe" that it's actually flying.
Also the drop in second 7 to 8 is a bit rough. a plane like that doesn't do these kinda drops imo.
The speed away from the camera seems a bit low. I think a plane would get smaller much faster on a "steady cam shot".
Maybe a streamline would make it more "graphic" too.

Cheers
Kumpel

Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: Martyn on Sat 17/10/2015 20:11:32
Thanks, yeah that's a good idea! maybe i going to change that later. :smiley:

I was also thinking of have the island as a separate piece, an make a parallax view of i
So it locks like the camera following the plane, In few seconds!

... but now i wanna make the demo playable!So  that you guys can see the game! :tongue:

Title: Re: Feedback on a short cut scene!
Post by: selmiak on Sat 17/10/2015 20:26:52
Quote from: Martyn on Sat 17/10/2015 20:11:32
... but now i wanna make the demo playable!So  that you guys can see the game! :tongue:
That's what I think is a good idea  :-D ;-D 8-)