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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: fertoff on Mon 28/06/2004 04:47:47

Title: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: fertoff on Mon 28/06/2004 04:47:47
i'm still working on that #@!!''$%# walking cicle...too hard to get it right...

Meanwhile(trying not to get frustrated) i made this sprites ...
tell me what you think

the usual spinin man(missing back pic)
(http://cablemodem.fibertel.com.ar/fertoff/left-right.gif)
(http://cablemodem.fibertel.com.ar/fertoff/left-right.gif)

And the talkie sprite ("uhh, he can talk..)
(http://cablemodem.fibertel.com.ar/fertoff/talkie.gif)
(http://cablemodem.fibertel.com.ar/fertoff/talkie.gif)

frames speed may not be right,,,but well, they are just the first version

thanks for your time
Title: Re: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: CobraKaun on Mon 28/06/2004 05:41:04
I think they're really good. Good transition of the character through different angles. Keep up the good work. =)

Title: Re: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: InCreator on Mon 28/06/2004 05:49:00
They actually ARE good. Only suggestion maybe would be to use more shading on face (with the color that's on his neck on last picture) and maybe on pants, it's shading looks somewhat random and cautious.
It also may be that two colors on shirt are too contrasty, you decide.
Title: Re: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: viktor on Mon 28/06/2004 08:32:10
they look briliant. The only thing that looks wierd is the talking wiew. It looks as he woučld be saying oh all the time. When I make a talking wiew I make 3 loops. The O, the A and the E loop. Then mix them in random order.
Title: Re: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: Johnny Odd on Mon 28/06/2004 16:10:18
I agree with Viktor, add more mouth shapes than simply  :o
You should also make the head bob up and down by about 1 pixel when he speaks....    perhaps?
Title: Re: Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics
Post by: Evil on Mon 28/06/2004 21:56:05
Yes, as far as the mouth goes, it should be huge. Not some little Michael Jackson mouth.

(http://www.fbc-bettendorf.com/evil/crap/fertoff_talk.PNG)

And theres something about the side view that doesnt look right.