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Title: First Attempt at my character
Post by: on Sun 21/03/2004 23:41:12
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Well posted below is the first attempt at my first main characters, body only! I have not done the head or feet. Just wanted to get some feedback on what I have so far.

First is 60x60:
http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins.jpg

and the next one is a 400% increase (or 300x300)
http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins_400.jpg

So please give me some feedback, and also what is the normal Sprite size of a character in a 320x260 Game?

PS. I am going for a semi-update Police Quest II or III style game.
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: Moox on Mon 22/03/2004 00:00:10
the right shoulders a little off, other than that, good job
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: on Mon 22/03/2004 00:33:26
Quote from: LostTraveler on Mon 22/03/2004 00:00:10
the right shoulders a little off, other than that, good job

I see what you are talking about. Let me fix it and add a head and feet and re-post!
Title: Repost - Check it out now.
Post by: on Mon 22/03/2004 02:08:51
Ok so here is the first full character. I know it needs some work, so some C&C is wanted. Please also give tips as to how to improve??!!!

60X80:
(http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins.jpg)

and then 400% increase:
(http://bytestud10.skillaid.com/10108/DetRobbins_400.jpg)

thanks in advance!

P.S. I know the face needs works, he looks to happy to be a 35-40 year old Decetive... but like I said, at least it is a start.
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: Moox on Mon 22/03/2004 03:05:53
hmm the smile looks clownish, maybe sun glasses and a straight mouth
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: Paper Carnival on Mon 22/03/2004 19:51:11
He's great, but I don't like his face. It's too happy
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: on Mon 22/03/2004 20:18:52
Quote from: Guybrush Peepwood on Mon 22/03/2004 19:51:11
He's great, but I don't like his face. It's too happy

Your right. I am going to fix his face, maybe put on some glasses. He is a detective.
Title: Re:First Attempt at my character
Post by: Valzebnik on Wed 24/03/2004 14:58:09
The hands should be longer! Only a little bit.A very fine way to test this is that u stand up and see how u look and mesure bodyparts with ur eyes.Then its easyer to do that on the comp!