first attempts at a backround, close up, and a bottle for good measure...
what do yall think?
(http://home.earthlink.net/~the_cable_guy/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/room.jpg)
(http://home.earthlink.net/~the_cable_guy/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/drawer.jpg)
(http://home.earthlink.net/~the_cable_guy/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/bottle.jpg)
[ img]http://addresshere[/img ] without the spaces
nice, but a little OTT with the wood perhaps :)
I love it, although the perspective could be improved here and there. (The typewriter for example)
The heavy textures may be a bit too much, but it's great distinctive style so I wouldn't worry too much about that.
--Erwin
Basically perspective problems, I don't particulary care for the flat look from the seat or the computer, but not bad, It also seems a bit like the object are kinda floating..maybe little dents in the carpet or something...
Yes, it looks great but needs some perspective help. Love the cup by the way ;)...
Nice! But the computer looks odd ;)
I would've expected a typewriter in place of the laptop...
Hmm... I think it would also be cool if the floor texture had some feel of perspective (don't know what paint program you use, but in Photo-Paint I would use a skewed rectangle...)
Otherwise: Stunning! :o
P.S: I like the writing on the bottle... Sounds tasty ;)
The drawer and the bottle rock, but the first scene needs less wood or some work done to it, and perspectives cleaned up. Really intersting though, I would really dig the first if not for those minor probs...
On the bottle, take out the first "a" written in the paragraph.