Crit this track - The Diogenes Club

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I spen the last couple of days working on this one.  Let me know what you think guys.  Be harsh!

http://www.mediafire.com/?8xdxgmvrxzz

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I'm not too keen on the Bugs Bunny intro. The rest of the song sound ok, @ 2h13 it just goes a bit over the top.

I REALLY like the intro after the talking part. Maybe just tone the scream down a notch or two.

Great work so far.

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