Some music (mp3)

[Paper Carnival]

I've always liked making up nice short tunes on the guitar, but I've always had the same problem: A short tune is not a song! No matter how much stuff I add to that small tune, the result is always repetitive, boring and short. At least it's loopable

So the following is my latest work. It was all recorded directly from my guitar amplifier, except the bass and drums

http://www.geocities.com/whisperfox2000/Dwebtor.mp3
Or, if you happen to hate Geocities and their low bandwidth whining, go to:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17948847/

Any suggestions of what I can do to add more to it instead of having the same thing building it up?

[ildu]

Geocities...Eww.

[RyRayer]

Nice and good song Guybrush. Hmm. Don't have any suggestions.

[Paper Carnival]

Thanks for your comments

Does anybody have any constructive critisism?

I created a DeviantArt account there, you can get it through there if you hate Geocities (see first post)