Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: on Mon 11/12/2006 00:35:59

Title: first backround
Post by: on Mon 11/12/2006 00:35:59
(http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8990/room1bi0.th.png) (http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=room1bi0.png)


please tell me where i can improve on. much appreciation
Title: Re: first backround
Post by: Khris on Mon 11/12/2006 14:16:13
The perspective is messed up big time.
Some pointers:
(http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6320/redrawpunkl7.png)

Look at the bottom of the back shelves, there's no depth anymore.
I've "corrected" only the most glaring mistakes, I'm afraid the whole bg has to be redone.