My First walkcycle, Girls and Fanny Packs!

[eternal_renegade]

Ok so I am really starting to get involved, slowly however. Anyways I can get away with this walkcycle and I know it can be improved (feels so basic) , so yeah C&C time!



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Here is an update:




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Update 02:
Added more frames and some motion


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I will work on this portion for now and move on to other angles when the time is right.

[skitzo]

You might want to make her feet sweep the ground a little more.
It kind of looks like she is doing a military high-kick march. Other then that it looks great.

don't take it the wrong way, I am sure my first walking animation will be a disaster  (I can't animate movement to well)

[Stupot]

I think it would benefit from an extra couple of frames in there, bearing in mind that in-game the sprite will be bigger and the movements more noticeable.

[eternal_renegade]

Yeah, the in game sprite shall be bigger, room resolution is 200x320.

I will definitely take both replies into account and work on it shortly!

EDIT:
Well here is an update, added two more frames and posted it in the top post.

[yarooze]

I like her... 

But it will look better, if you make her swing the arms a little bit wider.  Don't let them be hidden behind her back so much. More if she really "march" less to have sexy walk.

look here. They are not perfect but it shows, what I mean:
not so good: http://www.alionas.com/images/robin_walk03.gif
better: http://www.alionas.de/blin/de/Hobby/comgame/robin_walk.gif

Let her move her breast a bit. 

PS. One more lo-res girl to undress?  :