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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Dr Fred Rubacant Edison on Wed 30/07/2008 23:27:40

Title: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas? Updated 2
Post by: Dr Fred Rubacant Edison on Wed 30/07/2008 23:27:40
Here is the first floor Den for a Maniac Mansion  fan game.

Side A

(http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q301/Rubacant/Den1ADone.gif)


Side B

(http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q301/Rubacant/Den1Bnewtestlines2.gif)

Any ideas to make tham better.  What could i put on the fireplace.
Title: Re: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas?
Post by: Ryan Timothy B on Wed 30/07/2008 23:39:20
(http://www.bryvis.com/images/other/agsf/rubacant_mmlr.png)

I noticed the cabinet on the left was a little whacked out, perspective wise.

All and all it looks quite maniac mansion.  Good stuff.
Title: Re: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas?
Post by: Khris on Thu 31/07/2008 08:12:03
You should add depth to the book shelves and the wall near the fireplace.
Other than that, good job!
Title: Re: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas?
Post by: DanielH on Thu 31/07/2008 12:22:39
They look good, the biggest problem (as I see it) is what ryan timothy said, the cabinet is a bit wonky. I'm not a fan of the gradient floors though, but that's only minor.
Title: Re: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas?
Post by: DazJ on Thu 31/07/2008 19:32:47
And the wall's bricks on the left hand-side are not aligned correctly with the middle wall. Apart from that, I'm liking it!
Title: Re: First floor BackGrounds. Any ideas? Updated
Post by: Dr Fred Rubacant Edison on Sat 02/08/2008 00:54:54
I fixed and added stuff to the backgrounds


Den Side A

Fixed Cabinet, Try to add depth to book shelfs and windows and added new books

(http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q301/Rubacant/Den1ADone-1.png)


Den Side B

Fixed side Wall, Try to add depth to brick walls and fire place, added grate to the fireplace.   

(http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q301/Rubacant/Den1BnewDrawNew.png)


Thank you for all the help. If there wasnt a crit forum my backgrounds would look very bad.