Character Sprite - How can I improve him?

[vict0r]

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I'm really disappointed at how far off the mark you were.  Try again.

Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!

[Stupot]

That's brilliant ProgZ, man.  Thank you.  I'll see what I can do.

[EDIT]
Here's what I've got.

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Look how it has evolved... and to think I'd have been quite prepared to use the first one in a game
I think I'm going to leave it like this for the moment.  I'm really happy with how it has turned out.  Thanks everyone for your help.  Now I'm going to make a start on the W/C... (that's Walkcycle, not toilet...)

[vertigoaddict]

That looks GREAT (and a little creepy...in fact, they're all a little creepy).

Now that I look at it, the first four attempts look like sex dolls...