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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Calin Leafshade on Fri 21/08/2009 17:23:15

Title: First Room
Post by: Calin Leafshade on Fri 21/08/2009 17:23:15
I'm sorry for posting again, I promise this will be my last post on unimportant things but i wanted to make sure im not doing anything fundamentally wrong.

This is my first room.. The hanging man will be an animated sprite but i added it here for context

(http://www.thethoughtradar.com/PixelArt/basementwithman.png)
Title: Re: First Room
Post by: Technocrat on Fri 21/08/2009 18:03:08
The room itself looks functionally sound, I like the light casting on the wall. Something about the chair doesn't strike me as quite right, though, I think the legs need to point inwards towards each other a little more.
Title: Re: First Room
Post by: Scarab on Fri 21/08/2009 20:39:53
Not bad for someone who claims to "not have an artist's visualisation skill" :P
The only thing I can say is that theres something not quite right about the boards at the base of the walls.
When I first looked at them I thought they were shadows or a darker floor, with the lighter part being a carpet, and didn't see it until I looked at the base of the door.

However; I like the brickwork, the steel door and the chair. I think they work well together.
Also, I think the blood needs to be more 'splattery', because if he was in the chair when it was spilt, then I think it would've gone further.

Overall: I like it
Peace 8)
Scarab