First Screenshot For "Narcolepsy," Comments?

[Dr Snark]

The Screenshot Here

Im wondering if he is out or Proportion with the Building

or if it just plain sucks

Ok I just edited the Ink

[Gilbert]

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[Dr Snark]

Fixed the LInk -- Now on Village Photos

[LGM]

wow..  Bryce goodness..

It looks too plain. The shapes are kinda weird as well. I can't really tell what the heck he is standing in front of.

And he is outta porportion aswell..

Other than that.. Nice tree

[MrColossal]

i can't see it, i can never see images on this service

[Dr Snark]

as i say, NONE i repeat NONE of the web services allow me to link outside of My web site.  and i have naver had a problem with Village Photos, the Screenshot is probably too big or something for you.  

Yeah, I'll Fix the thing and stuff, its supposed to be a Shed.  can't you see it?

what kinkd of "weird shapes" do you see?

[D · Y · D · O]

No comments, just some praise. I really like those jeans, they seem very real!

[Kwark]

I agree on the jeans..matter of fact the whole character looks very good, 'cept for some jpg rubble. He doesn't seem out of proportion with the building, if it's supposed to be a house. For a shed, it seems very XXXL.

The grass, as it always seems to do in 3d images, looks rather sucky to me. Too dark, and too flat. just look at the razor sharp line between the grass and the path...

If you'd just add some substance to the grass, maybe put a bush there somewhere, or some other interesting object, it would look a bit less soul-less. Right now it looks eerily empty...but maybe that's what you're aiming at, with a title like that...

[Minimi]

nice character I'm using bryce too, and here is some advice of me to improve your image.

1. When you look at the ground you see a weird material/texture that should be grass or something. First of all, I think you can edit this material, to make the dots smaller and more dots. Second I recommend you to make grass on the ground. Goto terrain editor and make alot of spikes or import a blackwhite texture you make of grassdots. Appy a green texture to it, and it will give more realistic view!

2. Lower the tree into the ground abit, and also set the tree more close to the home, and resize it abit.

3. Replace the sun, because the shadows fall inconvenient!

4. Reduce the saturation of the material from the house.

5. Reduce the thickness of the path, wich is for as far as i can see some simple cubes put together.

I hope this might be helpfull to you!

[Flippy_D]

The character has no neck. He needs one.

Not a bad picture, I guess. Personally everything is a little too dull for my taste.

[Dr Snark]

Dude.. He's looking down, Its the camera angle

[Flippy_D]

Ah, righto then.