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Title: First Sprite
Post by: Corby on Sat 07/08/2004 05:26:29

I don't really know what I'm doing. Any pointers? Paintovers?

(http://this-is-me.ca/corby/stock/keira.jpg) (http://this-is-me.ca/corby/stock/keira2.jpg)

Thanks!

Edit: Newest change on right. She's still perfectly straight, but just for now.

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Sat 07/08/2004 05:53:44

being a detail fiend, I really like what you've done with the shading. She looks a tad stretched vertically though, doesn't she? :)

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: MrColossal on Sat 07/08/2004 06:38:01

how about a little compare/contrast with a real person

(http://sylpher.com/kafka/junk/edits/Corbyspritecompare.jpg)

Longer arms, wider hips and she'll look pretty good I think. I don't think you should tuck the feet in together like in the image, cause it looks so stiff, people would usually stand with weight on one leg more than the other, not so STRAIGHT UP AND DOWN SIR YES SIR!

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: Chicky on Sat 07/08/2004 11:10:19

I had a blast

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fghfh.gif)

tried to put in what eric said, its very a very rough mspaint edit just to show you the general shape. fell free to build upon it.

sorry for the poor gif compression, i was to lazy to open photoshop :P

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: Corby on Sat 07/08/2004 17:37:54

Thanks for the advice. You might be seeing this character very soon.

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Sun 08/08/2004 07:06:53

Now, where can I see more of the real person Mr Colossal used for the comparison :o

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: MrColossal on Sun 08/08/2004 08:42:36

http://fineart.sk/

Lots of models for artists.

I don't agree with Chickens edit in the chest area. Why did she go up to a DD cup size?

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: [Cameron] on Sun 08/08/2004 09:05:07

Let's stop talking about breasts before it gets out of hand. It has happened a million times before. :P

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: Chicky on Sun 08/08/2004 09:51:01

i didnt really concetrate on it to much, as i said it was all done very quickly without much effort. The breasts were probally just the circular paintpush ;)

Title: Re: First Sprite
Post by: R4L on Sun 08/08/2004 21:00:28

Did I hear breasts?! WHERE?! ;D

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