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Title: Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 26/04/2004 14:17:34
This is a character for a future fantasy adventure/rpg game.
Anything that I should change or add?

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Tut13.gif)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Tut13.gif)
Any comments appreciated..
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: big brother on Mon 26/04/2004 14:36:46
What has she got to be so damn happy about? Grrrr...
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Minimi on Mon 26/04/2004 14:37:38
She looks great, and nicely detailed. The only thing that bothers me is the face. Is she laughing constantly? I'd make the mouth a little smaller, and add a nose to the face.

but very good work!
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 26/04/2004 14:45:36
that's not supposed to be her normal face.. i liked that smile so i posted her with it..

i tried making a nose but it didnt look good.. on the side view you will see it tho..
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Phemar on Mon 26/04/2004 15:18:41

Her eyes being black make it look to dark. I like your sprite,good work. I'd like to see her normal  view though....
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: kaaZ on Mon 26/04/2004 15:35:00
Hey Synthetique, Realy good sprite...I did a quick edit :

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/synthEdit.png)

- Added some Highlight on top of her hair.
- Made here buttocks more present.
- Turned up the contrast (Maybe to much...but I like to     overdo on contrast).

Hope this helps

kaaZ
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 26/04/2004 15:39:45
hmmm... i will certainly consider those buttocks..
or maybe not.. theyre too low... i'll see what i can do..
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Andail on Mon 26/04/2004 15:43:17
Kaaz's modification is excellent in many ways, although the shorts should have been enlarged too, lest some might call it sexistic...

Apart from that, the sprite is really neat

PS: Synth; the buttocks are not too low in Kaaz's version! In fact, they are still far from natural, whereas your version looks more like manga. And whenever I see intimite female body parts drawn in a japanese style, I sort of react
:(
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Chicky on Mon 26/04/2004 15:51:13
the first thing that stood out to me with this sprite was the breast. I think they looks a lil saggy, and should be pushed up. I understand that those are the imprints of the armour, bur surley she wouldnt be hanging free inside it? Due to the female bra, the chest is pushed up to make everything more secure.

thats all really

mmmmmmmm breasts

-OSC
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: TheDude on Mon 26/04/2004 15:54:06
It's a nice sprite, but it looks a little strange how her arms are behind her butt on the front view but not behind it on the back view.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 26/04/2004 15:56:37
does it really matter as you in the game cant both views at one? i like changes.. it's more alive..
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Haddas on Mon 26/04/2004 16:00:58
Her legs look almost too strong in my opinion. and the the breasts
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: DanClarke on Mon 26/04/2004 16:07:29
lose the hair, it makes her look like an annoying TV presenter. I dont think i could put up with looking at her for any long periods of time. Looks good though.  ;)
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Post by: Scummbuddy on Mon 26/04/2004 16:09:33
well, i think the hair is just fine. sorry Dan, I do appreciate your comments everwhere though, but Im surprised no one has done a face change for him to help out. It'll come.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: LordHart on Tue 27/04/2004 03:49:10
Is it just me or does anyone else see the resemblance between this character and Melanie Griffiths character 'E' from Cherry 2000?
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: earlwood on Tue 27/04/2004 05:22:59
Sweet sprite, though kaaZ's edit seems to have a little cheek leakage.

The only suggetion I can give is to replace her legs with rockets and her face..with more rockets...that otta 'future' her up a bit.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Phemar on Tue 27/04/2004 07:34:29

I like Kaaz's edit mainly because he upped the contrast so much. I like it that way. I agree with OSC that the boobs look a little saggy, as if she were in her 50's. *shudders*
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: on Tue 27/04/2004 17:29:19
I quess i could bring the boobs up about two pixels.. that should do it.. i dont want an unnatural look tho.. most guys draw the boobs at the end of the neck..
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Post by: MrColossal on Tue 27/04/2004 18:24:49
I think they're just fine the way they are, leave'em.

If that's how she looks that's how she looks but you could do for some contrast in the colours a little more

whatever happened the to little purple cutey alien?
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Post by: sedriss on Tue 27/04/2004 21:51:50
She reminds me of Ruby Wax.

Great Job btw.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: on Tue 27/04/2004 22:41:26
That alien is still in a game in production.. But it's kind of a big game and im not so active here anymore.. so thats why you havent heard anything about it..
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Penguinx on Wed 28/04/2004 15:35:39
I like her breasts as they were. Hmm. That sounded better in my head than before I actually typed it.

Anyhow, real breasts start lower on the body and tend to have a bit more space between the cleavage than most seem to realize.

I blame Tomb Raider and it's ilk for the problem. Hollywood doesn't help, either.

Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Meowster on Wed 28/04/2004 17:10:36
Excellent, I love it. She really puts across her character... happy, outgoing, maybe adventurous, slutty....

Does she need to be under dressed? Is her role that of an under dressed person? Or does she live in a very hot country? Or is it just cool to be under dressed?

Perhaps it's part of her character. I mean, I would definitely say that she's a happy person because of her grin. I would also say she's easy. Or maybe everybody dresses like that in the future.

I would consider putting a little more on her because her current outfit puts her in a certain stereotypical RPG character category, and it's not a good one to be in. I mean, she's fit and healthy and she wants to show it off, perhaps. But it's not overly original, and it's just going to make her seem more like an object and less like a character. Unless of course, it is in her character to dress like that.

Also; her boobs are fine in the first picture.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Evil on Thu 29/04/2004 01:21:39
I istantly thought Tank Girl when I saw this. I added some things just for my own amusement. The head was a bit high though.

(http://www.fbc-bettendorf.com/evil/crap/tank_gal.gif)
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Thu 29/04/2004 12:14:36
Ami: She'll actually be wearing alot of different outfits. This one is just the first that I had drawn. And it's not finished yet. And thanks by the way. :)

Penguinx: I won't be changing her body features. I tried raising her breasts, but the perfectionist in me bitch-slapped me for even trying.

Rivers: I liked that metal thingy on the boot. May I take it? Not with this outfit tho.

I'm sorry about the lack of updates. I don't have a connection at home, and the only disc I had is dead.
You'll see some new stuff on monday.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Peter Thomas on Thu 29/04/2004 12:53:15
yay!

great stuff.
Title: Re:Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Evil on Fri 30/04/2004 01:46:20
Take whatever you want. I was just messing around a bit. Personally I think it isnt that futuristicy, but its still good.
Title: Re: Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 03/05/2004 12:34:26
an update:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Armor.gif)
I wont make it more contrasty... ok maybe a bit.. ;P

here's another one..
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/mechasuit.gif)(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/mechasuit.gif)
it's to go with this thingy.. havent drawn that robot thingy yet..
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/roboty.gif)
Title: Re: Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Babar on Mon 03/05/2004 12:55:32
hehe...I can see her smiling like that while blasting things up in that huge machine
Title: Re: Future fantasy girl C&C please..
Post by: Scummbuddy on Mon 03/05/2004 16:38:13
haha..

well, i would try and make her a pixel shorter when wearing all that gear. she doesnt seem to mind at all of all that weight. i dunno, maybe it weighs practically nothing in the future.