Evil Dr. Brainium, a character.

[CaptainPancake]

Here is a very early development of a character I'm working on.


Basically, he's evil, and tired.  He wants to take a vacation, and he plans to use the Flux Temporal Transportulator to send him to the future, where he can bask in the post apocolyptic sun and be back in time for lunch.  Unfortunately, something goes wrong, and the machine sends him into medieval times with no immediate way back.  How will Dr. Brainium get out of this one without his body guard Brutus, his right hand woman Seductra, and his army of killer robots!?  Well, I don't know yet.

Keep in mind, this is a stupidly early drawing of this character.  I'm thinking of shifting him less from Dr. Frankenstein, and more towards ex-soviet scientist.  Even his name is up in the air right now.

Comments?  Suggestions?  Constructive critisism?  Thanks.

[Nikolas]

Only that the shadow looks a lot like a shadow of a penis! Sorry

Other than that I dig the shinning in his boldness (and his shoes), as well as the limited use of colors (which works).

I'm not that long here, but welcome back.

Judging from this post and the introductory (huge) post you wrote, I will definately keep an eye on what you do!

[TheYak]

Dig the style very much.  Take some Sierra Dr. Brain influence and toss it into a Toonstruck kind of character and voila!

You mentioned it was a stupidly early drawing, but here's a nit-pick for the hell of it: Anatomy - While I'm sure it'd be different in a final draft, the length of the pinky is distracting (unless that glove's hiding a cocaine-nail) and the left foot looks lifted slightly and rotated outwards.  The right arm's longer than the other and the right shoulder and neck share lines too close to each-other so it gets a little visually confusing.  Ha, ha! I got to critique the picture before you do a final and there's nothing left to critique.  My masculinity is enhanced!

I'm intriqued by the Cold War era scientist idea.  Maybe something a little more Tesla? Or a touch more Dr. Wily (a-la Megaman)?  Interesting prospect either way (+2 to kick-ass points if he's wearing a cylindrical furry hat into which his bulbous noggin doesn't quote fit). 

[Afflict]

Love the style, as mentioned the fingers and then I think the neck looks kind of wierd.
Dude still looks good what about the in game pics?