My First Post, BG And Character(updated)

[Muck]

hi, well this is my first grafix in about ten years so... its not much and its not finished. I just need to know if i am going somewhere with this

here is the bg


And here is tim...


joy to all!

[Evil]

Despite the doubble pixels you are doing great. The bed, pc, and fan could use some work though...  

[Synthetique]

the double pixels are fine..

[Gus T.]

Obviously, this guy has excellent taste in websites.  

[Evil]

I DIDNT EVEN SEE THAT!!!  

[Muck]

Thanks guys!
I am not sure about what double pixels means, and i know about the fan and stuff  i just got tired and lazy....
but i will work on it, also there will be more stuff in the room.

Now for the web site; its part of the story in the game, its gonna be very short just about 3 rooms and one more character.

[Evil]

Doubble pixels look like this

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When they should be this

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Understand?

[Synthetique]

there is no "should" here.. if he want it to be double, then let him do it like that..

[Evil]

Sorry

[Muck]

ok so now i done a little more work on this BG tell me what you think
i need to know how to make this room look very hot like the sun is shining right thru the window?



Replys:

Evil: ok thanks for the tip, il try to keep that in mind...

Synthetique: thats ok i want to learn as much as possible...

[ravenfusion]

Looking good, now what I would change:

The line under the door doesn't fit in.
Outside the door, the blue line under the green wall, I would change it to a darker green.

Other than that, it looks nice.

[Muck]

Thanks Ravenfusion, i have done the changes....

[ravenfusion]

Ok, i've got a tip for the pillow:

1. create 2 curve lines that are isometric, they should meet each other.
2. Draw 1 line on each side going up-right.
3. Draw a curve that joins the 2 lines.

The result will be something like: