A dystopian audio file

[acolite246]

I got some ideas for background music for a post-apocalyptic, dystopian society-arisen-from-the-ashes-that-enslaves-innocent-people type of adventure game.

Sorry for the really, really, really bad recording, I recorded it on my cell phone as financial situations have prevented me from buying Rode NT1-As for miking my piano.

It is an AMR file, so you need to right-click the link and save as (at least in Google Chrome), sorry. I couldn't find a way to convert it.

Download and Critique Me!

EDIT
The chord pattern is C-F-C-F-C-F-G-F-C , rinse, repeat.

EDIT2
Its now an MP3

[Calin Leafshade]

I presume you recorded this on your mobile?

Get AMRplayer and convert it to MP3.. not everyone has masses of decoders like i do: p

[acolite246]

Thanks, I couldn't find one!

[Blobby 101]

that's really good, If you got that recorded in high quality and added some (maybe sampled) other instrument parts into It could be great!

[acolite246]

Wow, thanks! I'm in the process of digitizing it through Garageband.

[Viking]

Hmmm.  It doesn't really give me a "dystopian" vibe.  However, it might be useful for some sort of end credits sequence after all the meanies have been vanquished after a long, hard struggle and everyone is living happily ever after.

Dystopian ambience would seem to mandate either a minor key (or related mode) or perhaps a deceptively major-key theme with a dissonant accompaniment -- polytonality might work well in the latter case.

[acolite246]

It doesn't really give me a "dystopian" vibe.

Well, the song does include Major7 prominently which adds a somewhat 'strange' element, and an F/Em chord as a bridge to the F chord... but I see what you mean.