Gemmalah's start at art. (critisim welcome)

Started by Gemmalah, Wed 02/07/2003 20:10:32

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Gemmalah

Hello i'm rather new at this.
heres a few skeches i've animated for a project in media studies abou animation, later i may make a game, watch this space!

it is in the style of south park, and other simple cartoons so it's ment to be crude.

this is about kids who think they are dragon slayers.



This is Eddie, the leader of the dragon slayers.



This is Katie, Eddies very annoying little sister. (i know she has pencil legs)



katie walking right.



walking up, with very irratic hair, she needs some moouse to keep it down.



talking! no this one NEVER shuts up.



this hasn't got a name yet, any ideas, he is supposed to be quite thick, yet nice. yes there is a strainer on his head.

thanks to all
Gemmalah
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King_Crimson

it looks good to me, but i would change the arms-movement in the first girl-view. keep on the good work

Matt Frith

I like :D
Reminds me of Rugrats, where they all go round imagining stuff

However, the Katie walking right anim looks odd because the legs look like one is in front of the other (ie it gives the impression she has 4 legs - or something :S)

Apart from that i like the style ^_^


Gilbert

Really good stuffs, but I think the kids should hold "weapons" of some sort. ;)

Gemmalah

yeah i think i'll give one a little wooden sword, or just two sticks tied together, thanks i like that idea.

maybe a shield.
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AndersM

I would think twize about using the girl's walking animation...

Gemmalah

Quote from: MrMasse on Thu 03/07/2003 17:25:22
I would think twize about using the girl's walking animation...

why and which one? Could you help me with this?
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Neole

Very cute! Would love to see a game in this style.

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