MY FIRST CHARACTER EVER. Gonna need lots of criticism.

[Jide]

hi everyone,

this here is the main character from my first AGS game.
hes CERTAINLY not great so all advice is welcome.

hes meant to be a bit of a geek and an unlikely hero.
and i have so much to improve on so hopefully you guys/girls can help me there


ORGINAL


UPDATED

[LRH]

Not bad at all!
I made some VERY quick edits, and I am by no means a pro but here's what I come up with.

You say he is geeky, but he had some REALLY broad shoulders and very big broad arms as well!
I tried to slim him up a bit and pronounced his facial features. IMO he still has a rather large torso.

Just my take on your character, though. Feel free to take it or ignore it.

[Jide]

thanks   definetly more what i'm aiming for and i will post a new version soon

[Jide]

ok so i posted an updated version.
alot thinner and the hair is a different shape, as well as the hair and jeans being slightly different in colour.

so any criticism on the update?

[Khris]

Quick paintover with a few adjustments:


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[Jide]

wow thats awesome   thanks guys that really helped!!