A bunch of characters...

Started by Technocrat, Sun 18/11/2012 22:47:08

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Technocrat

Right, before I get around to making them walk, I just wanted to see what your opinion on these characters was. With any luck, I can go from there to make it walk more nicely!

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Merci!

Andail

I think the male character is good, although I'd define his facial features a bit more - he looks a bit washed out right now.

Like 99% of all male artists, you've drawn the woman's breasts far too big. I don't think this is necessarily sexist, but I'd change it just to avoid this kind of stereotypical portrayal of the sexes. If you take a look at real women in uniforms (google woman in uniform, and try to filter out the porn/sexy stuff), you'll find that their breasts are barely visible, at least they don't bulge out like two basketballs.

Her back view has some other flaws; her shoulders have suddenly disappeared, and her feet point outward in a way they don't do in the other views.

selmiak

yay, smells like a new technobabylon </fanboyism>

I like the man (regis?), dunno if the square hole at is knees is neccesary
the woman looks nice too, her angled arm in the front view looks a bit thin on the shoulder and therefore a bit thick on the ellbow. In the side view her face looks not that nice as in the other views and her foot seems 1px too flat and also has heels only in this view. I guess it's hard to show the heels in the other views so I'd get rid of them in the sideview, but this will surely take away some sexiness when she wears just normal boots. And her butt looks a bit big, either for sexyness and also compared to the backview. And what Andail said, the shoulders in the back view are gone compared to the other views.

Anian

I'd make the dark blue of the jackets just a bit lighter and make the face features on the woman (maybe even on the man) a bit darker. Just for some more contrast.
The triangle that's shading the man's knees looks weird, as it makes it look like the knees a bit higher than they should be (if the knee is making that shadow, then it should be lower and smaller). The ratios on his body are slightly off all together though.
Woman has the shoulders going too low and her rib cage seems weirdly stretched, like her armpits go to the half of her rib cage, when they should be near the top of it.
Btw I think the palette could be reduced greatly, the I opened the pic and there are so many shades of the same color...

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