Simple style of character...

[De-Communizer]

Well, I think I'm getting the hang of this "character" lark, but I thought it'd probably be best if I get somewhat more objective suggestions about how I could improve it before I start working on walk-cycles.




At the moment, something's striking me as "wrong" about the arms on the front view, and I feel like I could put more detail into the legs, but I'm not sure how. The boots too, but being dark, I'm uncertain what I can do to give them more detail. Any advice welcome!

[monkey0506]

The shading on her chest in the front view is very odd and makes her body seem misshapen. In the side view her face seems sunken in. The line going across her backside seem very rigid and somewhat out of place.

Beyond saying that I'm not sure what else could be done to improve the image, but those items stuck out to me.

[Brentimous]

The talking monkey's right, her chest was a bit on the odd side. I made some changes to that, evened out her feet, snipped her arms just a tad, and pushed that hair in her face to the left some more.




I didn't see any problem with the side view of her face, but I agree that the lines on her back could be altered a bit.

Overall, I really liked the style of the character. Best of luck on your creation.