A bit of music for C&C!

[InCreator]

Well, I'm trying to make something calm.
What do you think?

Any suggestions how should I finish this track?
Any other ways to improve this?

http://www.terran-x.com/increator/light.mp3 (bit less than 1MB)

[Neutron]

i like the feeling of it, if a bit mechanical. 

[George]

You say you're trying to create something calm? Well if I were you I'd go easy on the drum beats, because they sort of barge in on the rest of the tune… well that's my opinion.

But apart from that, you've got everything in perspective, keep it up! 

[BlackMan890]

here are some midis from rpgmaker 2000

fairy
gameover
lose
mystery
peace

should give some ideas