Thoughts on my parking garage

[ashmc2]

Hey All, Which looks better?

Any other thoughts are always welcome.

[Jakerpot]

The porportions of the 1 one are better, but the car look too 'dirt' anyway. You should clean more the lines and use better colours. I can't do anything now cause i don't know how to pixel art in a touchpad...

[gameboy]

The proportions of the car indeed look better on the first one, on the second pic it looks awfully stretched. In addition to the dirtiness the biggest problem is that the car's perspective is wrong. It looks as it is being viewed from a different angle.

Made a very quick edit to show what the car's perspective should be like. (I know it's not perfectly right but it should give a clue)

[Travis Anthony]

And I threw this together real quickly also.  I was thinking something more zoomed in would be more interesting.  You'd have to scale your character quite a bit with your background.  Not to mention the extra walking distances.  Which is boring.