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Title: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Mouth for war on Fri 24/09/2010 20:53:15
Hi! I'm working on a new game but I always have trouble making the front view match the side view...here's what I've got so far...
(http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9647/testafs.th.png) (http://img8.imageshack.us/i/testafs.png/)
PLEEEASE can someone correct this for me? I've been struggling for a while but I just suck :D
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: joelphilippage on Fri 24/09/2010 21:05:59
The face matches the side view pretty well but you should finish the drawing first. We can't correct what's not there.
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Mouth for war on Fri 24/09/2010 21:15:05
ah yes I can do that of course It was just that the face is always hard to do...I'll post an update soon :)
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Jdinky on Fri 24/09/2010 22:50:22
(http://i5.aijaa.com/b/00822/6772495.png)

It's a metalhead?  ;D Sorry i could not resist..
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Wonkyth on Sat 25/09/2010 09:20:37
The armbands and shoes aren't the same colour.
Not sure what else is out, though.

Perhaps that bulge down near his waist could be made a little taller, removing some of the hour-glass shape that doesn't fit the side.
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Mouth for war on Sat 25/09/2010 12:10:23
Ok I've updated it a little does the face match better now?

(http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8044/test2tu.th.png) (http://img411.imageshack.us/i/test2tu.png/)
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: MMMorshew on Sat 25/09/2010 12:18:25
To me, there is absolutely no problem with the face. It looks just the way I would imagine it looking from the front.  :)
Also, I liked that huge chin in the previous pictures. Why did you remove it?
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Wonkyth on Sat 25/09/2010 13:29:03
Yeah, I think the previous chin had more character.
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Jdinky on Sat 25/09/2010 14:08:39
Quote from: wonkyth on Sat 25/09/2010 09:20:37
The armbands and shoes aren't the same colour.
Not sure what else is out, though.

Perhaps that bulge down near his waist could be made a little taller, removing some of the hour-glass shape that doesn't fit the side.

It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas  :)
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Mouth for war on Sat 25/09/2010 14:48:17
"It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas" WORD!! :D hehe yeah i didn't spend very much time with it and i removed the chin to make the front view easier but I agree that the chin adds character. I'll see what I can do :) Thanks
Title: Re: I'd like some help on front view
Post by: Jdinky on Sat 25/09/2010 15:01:32
Quote from: Mouth for war on Sat 25/09/2010 14:48:17
"It's a ten minutes raw-work. Mouth of War got some ideas" WORD!! :D hehe yeah i didn't spend very much time with it and i removed the chin to make the front view easier but I agree that the chin adds character. I'll see what I can do :) Thanks

Let's vote: BIG CHIN  ;D