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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: 12431 on Sat 20/11/2004 13:03:13

Title: I'm back, and I've got some sprites to show you all ;D
Post by: 12431 on Sat 20/11/2004 13:03:13
Hi everyone!

been a long time now. excuse; fixed my social life.
just wanted to post some sprites. requested by scummbuddy.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bl%C3%83%C2%A5_kopp.JPG)
one i did in 10 minutes or so. just a little test
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/gongo.JPG)
the first human character i drew. least satisfied with the chin, but i think it's okay.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/gr%C3%83%C2%A5tende_hjerte.JPG)
a simple "emoticon" I drew for a girl I like. She liked it a lot too  ;).
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ku.JPG)
the first animal i tried to draw... tried to make it look drowsy/drugged, and according to many, that's exactly what it looks like
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/krokodillet%C3%83%C2%A5rer.JPG)
second animal i drew. not much to asy about this one, exept it it didn't turn out as good as i expected.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/nark.JPG)
then i drew a simple bum with a black eye.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/voffvoff.JPG)
and this is my favourite. inspired by that crazy cat from shrek 2 :D


as you see, I have been practicing drawing tears and eyes as they reflect a lot of emotions a character might have.

now, I've worked hard on these characters... okay, maybe not, but i would very much like some c&c. thnx ;D
Title: Re: I'm back, and I've got some sprites to show you all ;D
Post by: Pft! on Sat 20/11/2004 15:20:11
Nice. Can you animate them by any chance?  8)
Title: Re: I'm back, and I've got some sprites to show you all ;D
Post by: Rincewind on Sat 20/11/2004 16:06:48
Ah, this is good. Especially the shading.
You've really improved! :)
Still, there are some minor stuff that you could try and fix.

- The human head's right eye is a bit out of shape, try and make it a bit more like the left one.

- The bum's left eye looks a bit wierd, I'd make it a bit smaller, so that it matches the other one.
Plus, some extra shading on his chin wouldn't hurt, either. :)

- Also, the tears look a bit wierd - Maybe you should make them filled with light blue instead of just having them "see-through"?

- The heart-thingamabob's eyes could use a bit of definemtnet, as it is now, they don't stand out enough...

Other than that, a fine job, methinks. :)
Title: Re: I'm back, and I've got some sprites to show you all ;D
Post by: on Sat 20/11/2004 20:24:33
rincewind,
I'll get right on that when I get home to my .bmp versions of them Ã, ;)