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Title: I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: Valzebnik on Fri 19/12/2003 18:49:28
Well, with a little help and tips from InCreator my first game backround has been made!!! Ofcourse U C that it needs a lot of work! More detail and stuff like that there.When I´ll get Ur opinnion then I´ll know,what 2 change.

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Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: Cerulean on Sat 20/12/2003 06:57:32
Textures and composition are good.
The dashed line doesn't follow the perspective of the road. See how it's in the middle at the far end, but at the near end one lane is twice as wide as the other.
Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: Valzebnik on Sat 20/12/2003 09:08:18
Tnx 4 the advice.The thing about the road is that I made it last and I was really tired of doing everything else and it just came in a hurry.Nextime Ill save and continue when I feel like it! Here is another room made by me but this one was made for 320x200 game and no one helped me.Its a little boring but it is only under construction!!!

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Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: evilspacefart on Sat 20/12/2003 12:24:25
Cute. I think the door needs to be in proper perspective though and not cartoony perspective to match the walls, boxes, etc... it stands out looking out of place.
Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: Valzebnik on Sat 20/12/2003 14:08:13
Yeah I know,I srewed up a little but nothing to worry about,still a work in progress.I started with the doos & then made everything else but forgot 2 delete da door!
Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: Wormmaster on Sat 20/12/2003 19:28:28
I'm gonna get crazy.
Those broken places at walls are almost in every game!
And door isn't very much like door. :)
Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: n3tgraph on Sat 20/12/2003 19:28:52
be carefull with those smooth graphic filters

they could make your images look flat, like the wall in the first picture. It doesn't look realistic to me

for the rest, good job!
Title: Re:I made my first Normal game backround
Post by: on Sat 20/12/2003 21:38:39
Nice work (certainly as better than anything I can do right now) but the brick wall in the first picture was too distracting in my opinion. Try drawing only a few of the bricks like so:

http://www.geocities.com/weird_sir/street.gif