Not too pleased with it, the composition is messy..
(http://www.2dadventure.com/dsg/dsg030427.jpg)
Sharp.
Nince work Neole, but since this is the critics lounge: Ice is not the first thing i think of when i see this picture, I dunno why, but maybee she doesn't look 'cold' enough...
Agree with MrMasse, but very nice nonetheless. What are all these layouts for? Are they concept art for a game you're making or what?
Looking great! I really look up to you. I agree with them also. Maybe put some wind swirls or something?
Looking realy good Neole.
i personaly dont like her icey head thingy.
but that could be just me and my tatse.
but its looking realy nice either way.
Thanks guys! I dont think I have done an ice thing before so it was difficult to get the icey feel. Maybe I should have added crystalline facets to her bodies. Swirls would have been a good idea, though this was supposed to be an indoor ice castle sorta scene. The icicle head got too big I guess!
Xadhoom, these are just practise sketches I try and do daily. Not for any game.