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Title: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Tue 13/12/2016 23:47:11
Disclaimer : We're discussing the rear view only.

So we have this first draft for the rear view (a big big thank you to Nr. 2698 and selmiak for the sprite they drew despite me fixing a few things here and there).
[imgzoom]https://68.media.tumblr.com/9d6985b8e5c320e7a8a87567934bdd6a/tumblr_oi5dugqaOM1tsfksfo2_75sq.png[/imgzoom]
3x:
[imgzoom]https://68.media.tumblr.com/ba745feec6f1a7fc0f559694745849c3/tumblr_oi5dugqaOM1tsfksfo1_250.png[/imgzoom]

How would you make it better?
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Priabudiman on Wed 14/12/2016 08:40:49
For me personally, Nothing wrong over there Monsieur, at all. its a perfect flip from the front view all shading and lighting are well put in place. Awesome result.
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Wed 14/12/2016 12:07:46
Amelie made a great improvement; I've made more improvements on top of her work.

Which do you like most? A, B, C or D?
Look carefuly each image, to see what has changed.

[imgzoom]https://68.media.tumblr.com/563701c1270846b685bbaf8cb99f0832/tumblr_oi6cq0uvtl1tsfksfo1_250.gif[/imgzoom]
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Danvzare on Wed 14/12/2016 12:26:42
Personally I prefer B. But I don't trust my sense of judgement in these matters.
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: [delete} on Wed 14/12/2016 13:37:56
With A, your team artists crafted one very nice rear view. Maybe if Indy travels to a colder region, it would work quite well as a more warm bomber jacket.

D it is because it has all bells and whistles (subtle higher shoulder and better arm lighting). Also it works well together with C, maybe for an idle animation etc.
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: NickyNyce on Wed 14/12/2016 21:06:25
After changing my mind 4 times...I pick C
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Fri 16/12/2016 17:15:26
so any more votes guys? :)
Which do you like most? A, B, C or D?
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Cassiebsg on Fri 16/12/2016 17:35:42
Uhm... not A? (laugh) Does that help?

The other 3 just seem a slight positioning of the arm...
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: selmiak on Sat 17/12/2016 14:44:32
D has the best ellbow, but I don't like how the black pixels define his left arm
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Mon 19/12/2016 19:52:12
Quote from: selmiak on Sat 17/12/2016 14:44:32
D has the best ellbow, but I don't like how the black pixels define his left arm
You mean the shoulder articulation is too high for your taste?
Title: Re: Indy sprite : rear view
Post by: selmiak on Tue 20/12/2016 00:00:23
yeah, these black pixels make it look like it's cut off, and sewn on again, could also be the leather jacket then...