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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Tuomas on Sun 27/01/2008 19:32:42

Title: Insights, never thoughtless
Post by: Tuomas on Sun 27/01/2008 19:32:42
I wrote a short story a while ago. I finally got it uploaded at greatwriting.co.uk So I'm pasting the link here too in case someone would be kind enough to comment on it. The last chapter pretty much explains the whole story, but as a glue to the beginning, it's all from my thoughts or as they were at the moment, and basically what follows after the first chapter is what I think of when I read the first one through again. This was done mostly past midnight, and I think it shows. I was going to finish it, but lost the grip at some point. But let the art explain itself, right? Have a go if you will:

http://www.greatwriting.co.uk/content/view/12524/