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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: eternal_renegade on Tue 16/05/2006 03:14:28

Title: "It's Not Over" Midi
Post by: eternal_renegade on Tue 16/05/2006 03:14:28
Well I am looking for criticism so yah here ya go:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/It's_Not_Over.mid
Title: Re: "It's Not Over" Midi
Post by: ace monkey on Wed 17/05/2006 11:13:29
sounds good. the trumpet makes it sound a little rough though. maybe you could replace it with something a little softer- unless you want it to sound rough.
Title: Re: "It's Not Over" Midi
Post by: pslim on Wed 17/05/2006 12:32:57
This is a neat little piece you've got here. I like it quite a bit, and I don't mind the tuba; I think it works pretty well as a bass line. The only thing I would suggest is accenting the notes before the sudden rests more, and maybe even coming in a little more softly afterward with the lead-in tuba notes to give those sections more of a sense of shape and purpose.
Title: Re: "It's Not Over" Midi
Post by: Necro on Thu 18/05/2006 15:42:18
Yeah i think it needs something softer in the background , a flute or violin or something airy and soft, kind of unoticable unless your listening out for it , yet ties the rest of it together