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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: R4L on Tue 25/10/2005 19:49:07

Title: Just a sprite.
Post by: R4L on Tue 25/10/2005 19:49:07
I started this and finished it in like 2 mins but here it is...

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Char.PNG)

What do ya think? I think it's alright.
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Krysis on Tue 25/10/2005 20:01:59
It aint toooo bad, but you should really spare more than 2 minutes when making sprites. I suggest learning some basic human anatomy: How long are the arms legs torso and stuff like that.
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: R4L on Tue 25/10/2005 20:14:26
I just tried to see how fast I could make a so-so sprite. I take much more time when I draw a sprite that I work harder on.
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Nacho on Tue 25/10/2005 20:38:03
So, if you can't improve the sprite without help... why are you posting it in CL?
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: R4L on Tue 25/10/2005 20:45:08
I just drew a sprite and I wanted to know how it looks. It was only practice because I, like others, want to be better at drawing sprites. It's times like this I still had Adobe Photoshop. :'(
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Tuomas on Tue 25/10/2005 20:53:24
My suggestion is: if you want to be a better drawer, take some effort and draw the best sprite you can, not the fastest you can. Once you can't make it better yourself, post it here and we'll be glad to help. No-one's really interested in giving c&c to someone who isn't or doesn't look like he's even trying.

If you want to know how it looks like, I say it looks like a sprite drawn in 2 minutes. It lacks effort and thereby, well, if I give you advice, you still can't make it in 2 minutes... Anyway, what's the use of making one so hastily if you can do better? I don't get the point here... ???
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Nacho on Tue 25/10/2005 20:57:58
Rap, I don't want to be harsh or something. But you said "I want to be better at drawing sprites". Post here your better sprite and we will help to be better, not something you could improve with a little of effort.
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Sukotto on Tue 25/10/2005 21:15:58
it looks good. Is a little rough though. But hey, it took me ten minutes to figure out if I got my character's hair right!
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Phemar on Wed 26/10/2005 05:43:07
You should try and add a neck to him. Also, your colors are a bit bright ... maybe try darkening/reducing the contrast.

I'll see if I can put together an edit when I get home ... Right now, time for school!
Title: Re: Just a sprite.
Post by: Candle on Wed 26/10/2005 19:35:38
I like it . he kind of looks like a muppets character .lol