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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Synthetique on Mon 16/08/2004 15:04:01

Title: Just some art.
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 16/08/2004 15:04:01
Testing stuff in photoshop.
This took me a whole day to finish.. Let me know what you think.
(http://upl.silentwhisper.net/uplfolders/upload8/ferg_5.jpg)
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Mephistophilis on Mon 16/08/2004 15:22:31
That is Funky!
Damn, how did you make that?
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Arboris on Mon 16/08/2004 15:22:58
I'm not a real fan of furry myself, the picture itself looks really good tho.
It looks like its been chopped off at the edges, wich is a real shame. (i'm guessing your scanner wasn't big enough)
The only comment I would have is that her fur marks (those black spots) are a bit vague.

Its a real good picture IMO, I especially love how you've done her armor, putting alot of detail into it.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Rincewind on Mon 16/08/2004 16:16:27
First of all, great style - Looks incredibly good, I must say.
Though, one thing that caught my eye is the look of her left arm, which perhaps would look better if it was tilted backwards in an angle similar to the right one.
...Just my 2 cents, though... :)Ã,  Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Mon 16/08/2004 16:36:49
I really like this!Ã,  I think it's off to a great start.

My observations:
[li]The wings need some more details (add feather lines, etc.)[/li]
[li]The ear needs cleaned up a little (smudges out of the lines)[/li]
[li]Needs a little more shading (the tail, the armour, the hair)[/li]
[li]Some of the fur areas could use a little more contrast (as mentioned by Arboris)[/li][/list]

Of course, if you're finished it's still quite excellent.Ã,  These are only refinements I would suggest to make it even more detailed.

Great job!
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Mon 16/08/2004 17:05:48
Very well drawn indeed.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: mousemat on Mon 16/08/2004 21:46:40
brilliant picture it looks so professional
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Pet Terry on Mon 16/08/2004 22:03:42
That's lovely. Very cute character, I think I fell in love with her...

Yes, it's excellent! That's pretty much all I can say about it.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Evil on Mon 16/08/2004 22:40:52
Damn, I refreshed my reply. Oh well, I had a list of wings and explained what to do, but just have a look at these anyways. Damn, damn, damn.

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/BAEAwing12500a.jpg

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/SSHAwing12340a.jpg

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/RTLOwing21352a.jpg

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/PALOwing17100a.jpg

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/COLOwing20917a.jpg

http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/EGPLwingUWBM59631a.jpg

Those are just a few I grabbed from here http://www.ups.edu/biology/museum/wingphotos.html.

The image and coloring looks great. I'd love to see more.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: TheSaint on Mon 16/08/2004 22:42:26
nice work, good stuff takes longer to finish, i love the skin/fur color on the belly and fornt of body, paw to the left is still white i guess unfinished... markings can be vague its up to author i guess but more contrast would do it good i think.

cheers,
TheSaint
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: mousemat on Mon 16/08/2004 22:47:59
leopard paws are ment to be white.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Kweepa on Tue 17/08/2004 01:52:53
Damn!
From your little purple guy I didn't realise you had such talent! Not that he's bad...
A day is pretty good for that, I'd say.

I love the hair and the skirt.
Looks a bit weird having paws like that though...
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Ozwalled on Tue 17/08/2004 12:01:31
My only quibble is that the skirt thing looks just a but "Mcfarlane/ Spawn". Other than that, I think it's pretty slick!
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Kinoko on Tue 17/08/2004 14:50:57
I hate furries, I really do... but this is one bloody fanTASTIC picture ^_^ I'm impressed, and very jealous of your cool costume design.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: Lucky on Tue 17/08/2004 15:00:09
*slaps Kinoko*

Wonderful pic, furries rule.
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: DanClarke on Tue 17/08/2004 15:59:26
The only thing that gets me is that the pose seems a little 'unnatural', she seems too contorted. I'd also suggest making the paws a lot bigger, as they seem to taper a little from the arms. Apart from that it's brilliant, good work!
Title: Re: Just some art.
Post by: loominous on Tue 17/08/2004 17:21:57
The anatomy n such looks good but there s a lack of depth.

Added a quick, perhaps somewhat strong, shadow:

(http://w1.872.telia.com/~u87210460/AGS/ferg_5_mod1.gif)