First Post and bg for critic

[Chaos1987]

All time i'm searching for the right style. I love DOTT and SAMnMAX style.
It's same room from above.

What do you think?


And sketch, Maybe someone would like to give it a try?

[markbilly]

I quite like it. If you could match the style with your sprites it would be interesting.

You could try doing the same room again, using the outlines from the sketch, but removing the sketchy-ness from it. Then compare the two?

I'm ignoring your previous attempts to crit this, by the way.