Like LGM, I need a website crit..

Started by Renal Shutdown, Wed 07/01/2004 09:13:50

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Renal Shutdown

http://www.saltslide.co.uk/

jinkies told me about the scrollbar color, annie told me about the menu's scrollbar.

what else can you folk think of?

Hugs
Iqu

EDIT:
Oh yea, forgot to mention a few things.
1.  "A brief history of Saltslide" a comic, which I'm part way thru making.
2.  The songs section is going to have a "Boogie Mode", where the cartoon version of the band dance along to the track, in various different styles and costumes.  This is going to take a while, tho.
3.  A proper shop section will be made once I work out this stupid "Make your own Amazon" program I have.  I think you need a computer science degree to run the program and a German translator to understand the help section on their website.
4.  The singer wanted me to Lens Flare his guitar in the picture.
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TheYak

I like the design quite a lot, definately different from the norm.   Agree with the scrollbar color so it's not out of place.  Other than that, maybe different text layout for the informational pages.  If I came across the page and didn't know whose it was, my brain would just fuzz over seeing all that 10pt font in a flock of paragraphs.  The main/welcome page could have a touch more style to it.  It's a short introductory text so you can afford a little more space distribution.  You've got inches of free space around the text and that's on my 800x600 work monitor.  I think that welcoming screen needs to "slap you awake" more than just provide a friendly greeting.  As far as graphics/technical stuff go, it's quite nice.  Best part, I think it the music-preview link to loading animation, etc.

Darth Mandarb

Looks pretty good!  I'm not usually into that color of green but it's complimented well with the other elements/colors.

Just a few suggestions ...
* Maybe center the navigation/logo on the top of all pages?  (Also wouldn't hurt to center the footer too!)

* Move 'Links' (in the navigation) over and under the triangle looking thing (which doesn't do anything by the way?)

* On the gallery page, maybe swap the lower frames so the thumbnail images are on the right side of the screen with no border between the two frames (so the green just blends together) and the scroller would be on the far right?  I don't like scroll bars in the middle of the screen is all!

* I'm not a huge fan of Times New Roman, but at least it's consistant!

Off to a good start and I think I'm gonna download some of your stuff ... oh ... and do those pictures have anything to do with your icon?  (the fellow in the dress)

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LGM

I personally like the color scheme, and it's a simple and fast website.

Very nice. :)
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