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Title: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: joelphilippage on Sun 15/02/2009 20:06:10
(http://lifsadventures.googlepages.com/MegWalk.gif)
Here is a walk cycle I did. It should be a 6th grade girl who is a bit proud. People say this one is a bit sleazy.
(http://lifsadventures.googlepages.com/MegNew.gif)
Here is a new one were she walks heel toe instead of toe heel. This works a lot better for me. It looks a lot less bouncy in ags Feel free to criticize.
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: ALPHATT on Sun 15/02/2009 20:10:07
I'm not sure those clothes fit her...
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: on Sun 15/02/2009 20:24:42
The second one is pretty good and indeed less "bouncy".
The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: joelphilippage on Sun 15/02/2009 20:27:41
Quote from: Ghost on Sun 15/02/2009 20:24:42
The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.
There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: IndieBoy on Sun 15/02/2009 20:55:08
The body movement is very juddery and also her neck seems to be solid. Also her furthest away leg increases in size when it is behind her.
Quote from: joelphilippage on Sun 15/02/2009 20:27:41
Quote from: Ghost on Sun 15/02/2009 20:24:42
The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.
There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.
It is blueish violet. Maybe a cream colour might not make it contrast so much.


So a little less movement body wise, make her foot size consistent and possibly a little head movement and new top colour.
But apart from that I like it.
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: on Sun 15/02/2009 21:03:47
Quote from: joelphilippage on Sun 15/02/2009 20:27:41
Quote from: Ghost on Sun 15/02/2009 20:24:42
The purple top clashes most violently with the red, though.
There must be a problem with my monitor or yours. It's clearly blue on mine and looks fine.

That's what I meant, actually, sorry for being unclear. It LOOKS purple but yes, it's light blue with a tint actually. Might be with the magic pink background, that often confuses the eye (Not the best colour to chose as a background when showing a sprite, that was I was trying to say. I think. Er. Has anyone seen my hat?)
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: Jakerpot on Sun 15/02/2009 21:36:35
nice animation!  :) But i think she bunces too much, she look like she's shacking.
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: Trent R on Mon 16/02/2009 05:28:44
There's one frame that keeps bugging me, where her right arm jerks back. Or maybe that's just where the gif is looping, I can't tell.


~Trent
Title: Re: Little Girl Walkcycle
Post by: Jakerpot on Mon 16/02/2009 06:05:33
yeah, trent is right, when the arm go back it`s look like its slapping a wall.