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Title: Little Sally
Post by: danman23 on Sun 23/09/2018 18:37:34

Hi! Just wanted to get some criticism for this character I created.

[imgzoom]https://thumb.ibb.co/iAJaCU/Little_Sally0.png[/imgzoom]

Edited: thanks khris should of done that

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Mon 24/09/2018 16:37:55

Good sprite. Maybe boost the contrast and saturation a tiny bit? And try to make the hair's shading more interesting? (I wouldn't know how, though)

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: Khris on Tue 25/09/2018 13:38:11

If you use IMGZOOM instead of IMG we can take a closer look.

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: dactylopus on Tue 25/09/2018 19:09:51

For assistance:

[IMGZOOM]https://thumb.ibb.co/iAJaCU/Little_Sally0.png[/IMGZOOM]

I quite like the sprite. The hair could use a bit more work though, as much is lost when scaled down.

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: cat on Tue 25/09/2018 19:16:28

I agree that the hair needs more contrast. I think you should also remove the double-pixel from the skirt outline or replace them by proper shading.

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: danman23 on Tue 25/09/2018 23:55:42

How about this?

(https://thumb.ibb.co/ijGcE9/Little_Sally0.png) (https://imgbb.com/)

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: danman23 on Wed 26/09/2018 00:47:47

(https://thumb.ibb.co/kLCpSU/aaa.png) (https://ibb.co/kLCpSU)

Title: Re: Little Sally
Post by: Khris on Wed 26/09/2018 09:08:34

(not a paintover, just imgzoom...)

[imgzoom]https://thumb.ibb.co/ijGcE9/Little_Sally0.png[/imgzoom]

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