here he is, hopefully you're familiar with the character. at any rate, his outfit is from the castle of cagliostro, but his anatomy is more of a compilation. and i know he's not as skinny as he should be, but i'm not going for a straight reproduction.
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen1.png)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen1.png)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen2.png)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen2.png)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen3.png)
(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://taryuu.tripod.com/jigen3.png)
oh and ps, i know the gun kinda sucks, but i suck at making guns.
Good job, at least you captured the feel of the character.
Actually I think Monkey Punch had a habbit of drawing thin characters, you don't need to follow that if you're not going to copy his exact style.
he looks like an amish mafia :)
I like the character :D