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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Bubbles on Wed 06/12/2006 23:26:03

Title: Magician Sprite
Post by: Bubbles on Wed 06/12/2006 23:26:03
Hello noob here with a pixel sprite. I'm not planning to use this for any game, but I did this magician just for fun with 12 colors. I'm not satisfied witht this so go critique please.

(http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h61/LoomingWhisper/magiciansprite.gif%3Cbr%20/%3E)
Title: Re: Magician Sprite
Post by: eddie hitler on Thu 07/12/2006 12:08:49
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spell.png)
hello and welcome to the ags forums. I quite like your sprite but these are some problem areas I noticed. First off, his legs are bending in quite a peculiar fashion.Secondly, I think his cloak should be showing through his legs.there were a few jagged areas which I think I have dealt with in this edit.Also, I found his facial featuresÃ,  a bit difficult to make out, so I have attempted to make them stand out more. His hair was a bit of a mess and I think I have dealt with that too.I have left the arms alone because I couldn't decide what to do with them,are His hands on his hips or in his pockets?Im sorry if this is too much. :)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spell.png)
Title: Re: Magician Sprite
Post by: Bubbles on Thu 07/12/2006 14:32:56
Quote from: eddie hitler on Thu 07/12/2006 12:08:49
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spell.png)
hello and welcome to the ags forums. I quite like your sprite but these are some problem areas I noticed. First off, his legs are bending in quite a peculiar fashion.Secondly, I think his cloak should be showing through his legs.there were a few jagged areas which I think I have dealt with in this edit.Also, I found his facial features  a bit difficult to make out, so I have attempted to make them stand out more. His hair was a bit of a mess and I think I have dealt with that too.I have left the arms alone because I couldn't decide what to do with them,are His hands on his hips or in his pockets?Im sorry if this is too much. :)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spell.png)

no its fine, thanks for the help and hsi hands are in his pockets